Wednesday 19 November 2014

A story of friendship - The blue haze by Red Sparrow


This is a story for primary aged children. It has been written with boys in mind but hopefully the girls will like it too.



Eddie, Nick and Jake were unlikely friends but they were good friends and this is their story.

Eddie had just turned ten and today was a big day. His mum was allowing him to walk home from school by himself for the first time.

However, before we start let me tell you a couple of things about Eddie. First, he was smart and really loved science and secondly, he was a dreamer. It was this unique combination which led him to be stuck in this tricky predicament with his unlikely friends, Nick and Jake.

Feeling rather grown-up, Eddie starting walking home. He walked proudly out the school gates and down Victoria Road. He passed the bakery and watched the parents buying their hungry kids cheesy rolls and finger buns. He walked past the newsagent and watched Jack’s mum yelling at him to get out and cross the road as the man was green. He walked with a feeling of maturity, the way he thought a teenager felt. Eddie was almost home when he walked past the park. There were shrills of laughter from the little kids being pushed on the swings and tears from the little boy who had just face-planted down the slide but Eddie didn’t take too much notice – after all he was really getting a bit old for parks. It was only when he saw, in the corner of his eye, a blue light at the end of the park that he looked over properly. It was a bright blue haze and if he didn’t know any better, he would have said it was an energy field, something he had only ever read about. This was a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity, he had to have a look. He could hear his mum’s voice ‘Now Eddie make sure you come straight home’ what could he do? He looked around and spotted his neighbour also walking home. He scribbled on a piece of paper the following

Mum, doing a science experiment in the park. I will see you soon, won’t be long.
love Eddie.’

He asked his neighbour to give the note to his mum. She would understand, he was sure.

Eddie walked closer to the blue energy haze. It could be plutonium, he thought with glee. Then I could feed it to my bird Enso and see if he mutated and developed super powers, he thought. Just as Eddie was thinking about a giant Enso flying him to school each day, a humming noise snapped him out of it. He moved closer and studied the blue, humming haze. It looked like a tunnel that was spinning really fast.  It was truly awesome! It must be a quantum teleportation portal, he thought with the same excitement he felt going to bed the night before Christmas. He didn’t even hesitate as he jumped straight into the tunnel ¼ only to be spat straight back out.  Mmm, it must be spinning too fast for me to stay in there, he thought. He pondered for a minute and then he knew just what he had to do. He went to find his friend Jake, knowing exactly where he would be – in the computer lab at school.

Jake was also ten years old, and was a total computer whizz. He was so good the computer teacher would often ask him to take the classes for her. Jake had taught himself to read by the age of three so that he could use his mum’s computer. By six he had written his own software and by eight he had built his own computer from scratch.  He knew more about computers, Apps, programming and hardware than anyone Eddie knew, and this is why he called on Jake this particular afternoon.

As expected Jake was in the computer lab explaining something to the computer teacher. ‘Jake!’ Eddie called from the door.  ‘I need you, I really, really, need you’. Jake came over and Eddie explained about the tunnel and his theories very softly so the computer teacher couldn’t hear. ‘I think my body might be may be too dense to go into the tunnel so perhaps we could slow the spinning down somehow then I might be able to get through the tunnel and then see if it is a teleportation portal like I think it is.  Do you think you could somehow slow the spinning of the energy tunnel?’ Eddie asked.  Jake looked upwards as if his eyes were studying the way his brain was thinking. Then, after a few seconds a big smile erupted on his face. ‘I know what to do!’ he cried.  In the same breath he yelled ‘I’ve got to go Mrs K sorry data emergency’. Jake grabbed his laptop and ran out the door with Eddie.



On the way to the park Jake explained to Eddie what he was going to do. ‘You remember Einstein’s gravitational time dilation theory?’ ‘Of course,’ said Eddie. ‘Well, remember how time or energy can slow when it’s closer to a stronger gravity force?’ ‘Yes,’ said Eddie. ‘Well, I think I can write a program that can increase the forces of gravity in this exact spot, then hopefully we should be able to slow down the energy source, which would slow down the tunnel,’ Jake said rather proudly.  Eddie began to smile, ‘don’t get excited yet’ said Jake. ‘I will only be able to do this for a very short period of time, so you will have to be really, really fast, Eddie’ he said.   ‘I can be fast’ said Eddie. Jake didn’t look so convinced. Unlike Eddie, Jake was not a dreamer and was very practical. He thought for a moment and then said ‘Eddie have you wondered what may be inside the tunnel or even on the other side?’ Eddie laughed: ‘An adventure of course!’

It didn’t take long for Jake’s computer skills to kick in, and the program was soon finished. ‘Eddie, it’s ready to go,’ said Jake, quickly followed by ‘Are you sure about this?’ Eddie rolled his eyes at Jake. ‘Just tell me when to run into the tunnel.’ ‘OK then,’ said Jake. ‘I’m going to count you in and when I get to zero you need to run into the tunnel as fast as you can.’ Eddie gave him the thumbs up and prepared himself just the same as he did before the last school cross-country run. Eddie was a fantastic scientist but he was not a very fast runner, so this was going to be an experiment in itself!

Jake typed a few final characters on his laptop then started the countdown ‘54321 and zero run, Eddie, run’ he yelled. Eddie ran with all his might as he forced his way into the blue energy haze. He felt as though he was in a washing machine being tumbled around and around. He felt weightless and without power over his body as the energy forced him to do somersaults backwards, sideways and forwards. He thought he could see an orange glow a metre away but it was impossible for him to move any further down the tunnel. The force was too strong and the spinning was getting faster and faster and the backwards pull was too intense. The next moment he was thrown out of the tunnel and landed on his butt. His head was spinning but he was not hurt, in fact he was really excited.

‘Jake, that was awesome!’ he said. ‘I almost made it through but it was just too strong for me.’ We have to try again,’ he said. ‘I can’t slow it down for any longer’ said Jake. They both sat in silence for a minute thinking about how to solve this dilemma. ‘We need to increase your physical power,’ said Jake. ‘We can’t do that in 5 minutes though,’ thought Eddie out loud. ‘Ahh, but what we could do is get something to help you, like flippers help swimmers,’ said Jake. ‘Something or someone,’ yelled Eddie. He knew just who could help him - his friend Nick V, and he knew exactly where Nick would be: at the school cricket nets.

Nick V loved sport and was very good at it. He spent all his time playing sport and was the fastest and strongest person in the school. Eddie and Jake raced back to school to find Nick at the cricket nets. ‘Nick, Nick,’ they yelled. ‘We need you quick, come over here.’ Nick V looked up from under his helmet and gestured to his teammates to take a break. ‘What’s up, guys?’ he said.


I think the question should be asked here: how do a science lover, a computer whizz and a sports nut all end up good friends?  It wasn’t as if they played together at lunchtime, Nick was on the sportsfield, Eddie was in the science lab and Jake was in the computer lab. No, these three boys had more in common than interests. It was the qualities they shared. They were all kind, they were all fair, they were all loyal and they always stood up for each other. It was these things that made them such good friends to each other.

So naturally, when Eddie and Jake asked Nick V for help he was there without any questions.  Well, maybe one question. ‘You want me to catapult you into a - what did you call it again?’ Nick V asked. He thought maybe Jake had been looking at too many computer screens and Eddie had been sniffing too many science chemicals! ‘Are you guys feeling OK?’ he asked. ‘Let us show you, so you will see we are not going mad,’ said Eddie, ‘but be quick.’ Eddie was realising his time would be running out before his mum came looking for him. ‘Fast is what I do understand!’ smiled Nick V, and with that they all ran back to the park.

‘Wow,’ said Nick V, ‘this is amazing. Where will it take you?’ ‘We’re not sure, but there are theories that say it could take us to another time, or to another universe, we don’t really know,’ said Eddie. ‘Awesome,’ said Nick V.  Jake frowned. ‘I still think the risk is too high - how will you get back?’ ‘Let’s figure that out when I get there, wherever “there” is,’ said Eddie. Jake explained the process to Nick V and they agreed that when he counted down to zero he would catapult Eddie into the tunnel with all his power.  

‘Are you ready, Eddie?’ asked Jake. ‘Yes,’ said Eddie. ‘Are you ready, Nick?’ asked Jake. ‘Yes,’ said Nick. Jake tapped on his computer and then started the countdown ‘5… 4321 and zero GO!’ he yelled.
Nick V did a little run up and then, pushed Eddie up into the blue energy haze as hard as he could. The only problem was that the force was so great that Nick was catapulted into the tunnel too.

They were both enveloped in blue energy haze. They felt as though they were whirling in space as they were spun around and around and around in the tunnel.

This is what it would be like to live in a blue slushie, thought Nick. There was a deafening hum and he could see that Eddie was trying to yell something to him, but he couldn’t hear. Everything was spinning and he was going around and around. He could see the end of the tunnel, with an opening, and an orange glow beyond. He was close to it, very very close.  

 Eddie, however, no longer had the feeling he could make it to the end of the tunnel. He was still spinning and being flung around, but suddenly, in the blink of an eye, he was spat out of the energy tunnel and found himself sitting next to Jake in the park.  

Nick was no-where to be seen.

What happened next?




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